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  1. 2017考研英語寫作技巧

    發布時間:2017-08-10 編輯:少冰

      小作文考研英語寫作中比較容易拿分,甚至拿高分的部分。可是由于小作文需要注意的地方比較多,加上考場上緊張、焦急,很多小伙伴會在這個地方出現不該有的失誤。以下是小編為大家整理的2017考研英語寫作技巧,僅供大家參考。

      范文:

      Dear Li Ming

      I am writing this mail is to congratulate on yours admitted to a university and put forward suggestion regarding the preparation for university life. The detailed information is listed as the following.

      At the top of the list , the university is one of the most important parts of our life ,you may have a wonderful life in it. Another point I would like to draw your attention is that inthe campus , you may have much free time , you should take good advantage of it. In addition , there are many excellent people in the university ,you should be modest in it .

      I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. And I am greatly grateful for your time and attention.

      Truely yours

      Zhang Wei

      點評:

      本篇作文的作者在每段開頭首行縮進4個字符,這點做的很不錯,但還是存在一些問題:

      ⑴格式錯誤

      ①Dear Li Ming這個稱呼后面應該加逗號;

      ②yours后面也要加逗號。

      ⑵語法錯誤

      ①第一段第一句話中有兩個謂語動詞am writing和is;on是介詞,后面應該接動名詞,所以應該是admitting,但此處是“被錄取”,應該用被動。這句話應該改為:I am writing this mail to congratulate you on your being admitted into a university;

      ②從第二段看,提出的建議不止一個,而suggestion可數,所以應該用suggestions;

      ③詳細內容如下,The detailed information is listed as follows和The detailed information is listed as the following都可以,只不過the following一般做前置定語,前面一個句子是常用的表達,后面一個句子用的較少;

      ④“在我們的生活中大學是最重要的部分之一”應該是in our life. Another point I would like to draw your attention is……I would like to draw your attention做后置定語,但這里要注意:雖然draw attention to是固定搭配,但這個to加不加都行。第二段的內容還行,但是論述不夠充分,應適當拓展;

      ⑤最后要注意的是Truly yours的書寫,尤其是“Truly”的書寫;

      ⑶優化建議

      ①表示“第一、第二、第三”的連詞:

      To begin with, furthernore,/what is more, Last but not least

      In the first place In the second place At last

      ②在第二段里面,建議提出一個觀點之后用一句話闡述。如果字數太多,可以只用2個觀點;如果字數偏少,則可以提出三個觀點,再略作闡述。

      ③表示“重要”的詞:crucial, fundamental, essential

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